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April 14, 2010

Writing about writing isn’t writing, but it’s a lovely distraction

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Okay, so I’m completely drowning in my content revisions for my adult suspense novel.  Just by changing one reveal in the plot, I have created a domino landslide of details that must also be changed.  My eyes squint like tiny slits from reading and re-reading my print copy of my manuscript.

So what am I doing blogging when I have so much to do to finish my rewrite?

I’m writing about writing, of course.  It’s a lovely distraction from all the details bouncing around in my brain like a stadium full of randomly released ping pong balls.

I know many of you can, and will, argue that writing about writing IS writing.  And to some degree, that’s true.  Anytime one puts words to paper (or fingers to keyboard), that’s writing. 

But if you really want to write with a purpose and achieve your goals, you must focus on specific projects…in my case, this novel revision.

Just like email and surfing the net can become giant distractions for writers, so can writing about writing, however, if you need a moment of distraction, what better topic to blog about than something to do with writing.

Distraction over…back to revisions.

April 7, 2010


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As I mentioned in an earlier post, my first adult suspense novel has been picked up by a publisher.  Exciting news to say the least.

It took about a month to get back my content edits after I submitted my polished, formatted final draft of the book.

I was happy to see that the line by line edits were far and few between.  Most of them involved changing a few words to a single word (tightening the prose) or clarifying a detail for consistency throughout the manuscript.  Revising these areas was neither time consuming or challenging.

I’m now working on the content edits, of which there are basically three:

1.      Heroine needs to take action much sooner in the manuscript.

2.     Hero (her husband) needs to be less passive throughout.

3.     The publisher recommends a different ending to tie everything together.

I completely agree that my heroine takes a long time to address the emergence of a past secret and have found a way to introduce this information in an earlier chapter.  By doing this, I can also find ways for her husband to become more actively involved in the plot, thus solving two content issues in one.  Rewriting these passages hasn’t proven to be too difficult a task and I’m excited at how much stronger they are making the overall manuscript.

Now we come to the issue of the ending.  Although I can see the book with the content editor’s suggested ending, I still feel very strongly about keeping my original ending.  And it’s this one aspect of revising that has me rethinking my entire manuscript.

With the deadline to have revisions completed fast approaching, I struggle to make my decision about the end.  But thanks to my critique group, some writing friends, and a pro/con list that I’m compiling for each ending, I am confident that I will reach a decision in the next couple of days.

Getting published is hard work.  No matter how polished and perfect you make your manuscript, the publisher has suggestions and recommendations that they feel will make your book sell more copies and it takes a lot of work to revise, rewrite and rethink your manuscript to meet with their approval.

But when you hold that first copy of your book in your hands, or see it lining the shelves of bookshelves and online bookstores, you’ll be glad you did your revising…rewriting…rethinking.

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